by subslutjenna
I want to thank you all for your lovely feedback. It's so amazing to hear from so many of you. You're all so awesome, and thank you for reading and enjoying my writing. I think it's crazy how so many of you suggest things that are already in new chapters. It makes me feel like you're reading my mind lol. I'm working on a few more but be patient. I don't have a lot of free time. Happy reading and again, thank you for enjoying me xoxo big mmmmmwah!! :)
Another chapter so soon ... and I like it! Longing for the next one. More, more, more ... please :)
Condense this long winded, run on sentence to about 3 chapters and you might have something worthwhile. As it sits it is neither clever, original or entertaining. Not worth the time spent reading it.
Man I love this story. The double narrative keeps the action up without losing the plot. It's very sexy.