All Comments on 'A Sentimental Heart Ch. 06-07'

I usually love your stories, but this one is just, well, boring, I see no chemistry between them and Miranda is annoying.

Miranda is a bit self effacing, but that seems to me to be her journey in the story. She's captured the alpha's affections, and her reluctance is one of the hurdles that they have to overcome.

Unless she flips out.

Of course if he just uses her he'll lose both siblings - and maybe a dragon lady ;)

M

said the fly to the spider

The author seriously needs to consider writing bodice rippers for a living. That bedroom dream bit had best seller written all over it. And the suspense of just when these two will come together has been killing me. Even with this ending it is no sure thing as there have been so many plot twists that suddenly intervened to separate them. On to the next chapter and more fun reading!