All Comments on 'A Sentimental Heart Ch. 08-09'

thought you'd never update again. but u did. Beautiful .very beautiful. You should get your work published.wondering how this would end.Miranda would break her heart at the hands of a rich, handsome marcus? I'm so in love with miranda.

Thats what they call romance. Very soft romantic story. my heart went aflutter while reading this and the way they made love with each other was so good.You are good.

***** stars for you.

back with a bang.lov the chemistry b/w them. want a happy ending for lov birds.

Like the rich guy-poor girl concept. Dunno miranda will ever meet the rich guy's expectations but their love is sweet.

too good

Love is in the air

Heart warming.want them to end up together.give us next chapter soon

-k

I hope your not done. I would like to see more and get a nice happy ending for Miranda. I also would like to see what happens with Peter and Amanda.

asap - please - lol - cannot wait - ha!

Thank you for such an interesting circumstance - so now that you have us all in your hand - what will it be?

Let me know when.

Please add more chapters to this story

I've had this one marked for a long time as one hopefully to come back to. That is an indication of how well I thought it was written. I sure hope totally can regain the sense of the characters and continue it.

I totally love this story...please, please continue!

Wonderful story! Please keep on writing more about Marcus and Miranda! I would hate for you to end it like this

Feeling the pain of this already. Peter will clock him one if he find out Marcus used those words... Good story, I care for the characters.

The sex is rather bland, but a good romance nonetheless.

Jason

but still don't know how old he is, or if he even . . . .

Such an idiot! If Marcus screws it up i shall hate him!!! I hope someone gives him a swift kick to the balls and sets him straight about a real marriage works. Perhaps Amanda or better yet his mother can convince him to get his head out of his rear and see that he and MIranda would make a wonderful team, each complimenting the other. Oh well, on with the story as I get ready to read the next chapter.

To go on and the descriptive interaction is so realistic - very well done!