All Comments on 'A Series of Realizations'

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chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

DaddysIncestGirlDaddysIncestGirlover 3 years ago
Anti-Climactic

I hope you're doing another one! That end was disappointing

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Poor

Not even remotely realistic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Don’t leave us hanging

Throughly enjoyed the story

Hopefully you intend to write a second part

colonel_lockecolonel_lockeover 3 years ago

Loved it. Hope there's a chapter two coming!

redpoppiesredpoppiesover 3 years ago

I liked it. It was a nice believable fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good story

Nicely done. It was an efficient crafting of a good telling. Your story rekindled some fanciful memories of my own.

Rwa4768Rwa4768over 3 years ago

I would like to read more about her and her dad.

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