All Comments on 'A Shock Humbling'

Such an understated expression of the fetish of humiliation, "It's demeaning. ...I am furious and enthralled."

And such a skilled erotic pen. Your 3 stories are beautifully written & erotic. It makes me wish you would turn those talents to something more ambitious & dramatic than these truncated BDSM "scenes" - i.e., long form stories with e.g. character growth, resistance & surrender, the evolution of a submissive mind, *conflict.

Still, they're a 5/Fave for me on their own merits. But... do better. ~P.M.