All Comments on 'A Short Fall, A Shorter Rope'

Stupid, sorry but it is. 0 stars

Excellent

It was tough reading at first. I'm glad I stuck with it and everything turned out incredible. Fiction is fantastic.

Five Stars

Was getting ready to skip ahead after page one and give you a 1, but then you salvaged it. Kudos.

He talks of thomas and lexie has a son, singular. But she got pregnant again, right?

I am not reading this ridiculous nonsense. Cleans up his wife. For fucks sake that is so absolutely disgusting and twisted, not to mention dangerous. You need your head examined.

Great story!

Loved the cement overshoes. 😁

He gave her money. What. Total Wimp ass castrated Cuckold.

You know that intro bit you wrote at the start, a warning about suicide would have prevented me going further, don't know if they succeeded, quit reading with the stool being pushed out from under them, 1* would give minus score if I could.

He goes from having no self respect to having 2 women fall in love with him? Sorry, I don't think so.

To make a long story short.

Page 1....the guy sucks cock

Page 2 and 3 he has long bouts of adulterous sex.

Page 4 a bit of murder porn and revenge that excites the closet cucks.

1* for the first page.

Utterly ridiculous! Wimp turned stud fucking 2 women? Ridiculous mob bullshit too 1*

too much too much. in the bad as in the good.

Often too much imagination or exaggeration detracts from the narrative.

Story started out OK, particularly with the attempted suicide. But then the story was just another by-the-numbers BTB, and then the stupidity of a man living with two wives. So, would have been a 1*, but the beginning results in 2*.

Dr beulahthebrit; Total BTB crap as usual. 0 stars

Decent. The first part was very difficult to read through. How did Lexie get him to change colleges? That is quite a process, and unless a) he applied there, and b) there was room he wouldn't be able to switch unless a LOT OF MONEY was involved. Also, you completely left out their families. What about the parents and siblings? Unless her family was seriously mentally deranged, her actions would have elicited a huge apology from the parents and she would be in deep sh-t. As to giving her money, I wouldn't have. She deserved to go back to her parents as a cheating slut with her lover's child. She really should have a miserable life full of regret.

You did well. Gave you 4 stars for the quick having kids and getting too much revenge. The guy in the river was a little overdone as well but it worked.

Looking forward to more from you.

The story would have been more credible with either Cindy or Stella. Having both made it into too much of a fantasy.

The writing is crisp and clear, and it held my attention.

Nice story but I wish MC was more ruthless on his ex.

I would enjoy a sequel

Story went from awful to good, then to really good. But the polygamous ending dropped it back to *3 for me.

What a fantasy.

"This is a one or two-parter...your choice. "

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No, it's the writer's choice. If you have so little faith in your own story you'll only continue it if people kiss your ass, don't bother.

Underdog wins finally! We’ll written story that ended as it should.

Kudos to you

Meh

Oh and 5 Stars from TK

Page one was so bad right out of the gate that I just had to give up.

If it got better, good on ya.

There's NO way he should have given Lexie anything. Let alone be friends with her.

Terrible, disgusting female. Why bother?

LWlurker

Looks like a future series??

I just read the first paragraph. Personally, I believe that anyone who wishes to take their own life should succeed. Back to the story.

Still page 1. "I was helpless to stop her." No one likable here.

This is just idiotic: "I gave her twenty grand to get her started and let her keep the Camaro."... Yet more misplaced "chivalry" in an LW story.

Disgusting, he should have went through with killing himself after swallowing another dudes cuma nd letting him fuck him in the ass

Would have been more interesting if the suicide was successful and the story became the fallout of Lexie’s life as a result of his death.

What was the point of teasing us with jujitsu if it was never used?

It was touch and go though.

The rest of the story was enjoyable and I will likely give that part another read.

Started as an awful story and then morphed into an excellent story. I normall give Cuck stories 1/5, but this one earned its 5/5, that is why l read all stories that interest me. Because every now and then what appears to be a cuck tale turns out to be something better

5/5

enjoyed the read waiting on your next story 3.5 stars for me

Lexi deserves to be on a street corner somewhere, earning money for childcare and her drug habit.

Seemed like he went from hanging himself to a threesome in 24 hours. No one noticed the rope burns on his neck or dropped him off at the psych ward because he tried to off himself but two women in a programming class have BOTH been holding out for him waiting for this moment to share him? I'm thinking had this been paced out better throughout all these notes you hit throughout could have been played in a multipart series. It was more like watching a lifetime movie in fast forward. Now that you've seen the comments maybe give it a polish and pad it out a little bit.

Depressing as hell. The poly stuff ruined it completely.

so does he still suck on cocks? sorry but any guy that does that is either gay or bi or to stupid to live. skimming this thing made me feel like i was watch some sick cartoon wasnt a real person in it

If 'Loverboy' showed "no visible means of support", wasn't the same true of Mark? Was he a trust-fund baby? Or was he mobbed-up, too? Otherwise, an interesting and creative story. That Mark chose to fight back is a breath of fresh air in the cuck-infested pond of LW. Thanks!!!! 4/5!!!

We all like a happy ending fairy story and this is one. Quite well written too, thank you.

Now thats a story. Well written, thought out. and even a death btb. Not bad. Excellent. Seems not everybody is into cuck stories

I skipped the middle cuck, cuck, and more!

Thank goodness that 2 of the hottest bisexual women had just been waiting for a chance at a long term 3some with a guy they didnt even know! Wow talk about luck!!!

It was decently written, just the story was so out there that I thought it was stupid and skimmed alot towards the end. Also am I missing something, the ex had 2 bull trophies correct? Maybe I missed the part where the mob took one to raise as their own as payment for letting her live.

Actually the last three pages were his hypoxia induced fantasy as the rope cut off oxygen to his brain, because no male — he clearly wasn’t a man — would have put up with the shit he did on page one.

So, a guy who was too blah to ever have a girlfriend throughout high school was just so hot, hot, hot that he had two gorgeous girls checking him out in college, to the extent that his wife noticed them, and warned them away? A guy that couldn't get his wife off with his cock was a super stud with two bi babes? A guy who was able to swallow his pride enough to suck his wife's bull's dick and get fucked up his candy ass was a manly man when it came to Cindy and Stella, studly enough to keep them both so satisfied that they were willing to share him?

In the original comic books, weak and lame physician Donald Blake, hopelessly in love with his nurse, Jane Foster, but too meek and scared to tell her, finds an old wooden staff in a cave in Norway, strikes a rock with it, and becomes the mighty Thor, God of Thunder. That's more believable than this one!

51 comments on a cuckold garbage story? Unbelievable.

Ah-SO, OOPS, sorry, I meant Ass-Ho Reed Richards denigrating this author for what-ever reason. I've had the opportunity to read some Reed Richards handiwork... and Eh. LP

"Actually the last three pages were his hypoxia induced fantasy as the rope cut off oxygen to his brain..." Nailed it.

1 star - no comment

Summary: Crap!

Good story, well written in my mind. Not just that, I just enjoyed it.

Cuckold nonsense. No man would willingly suck off another guy unless he was gay... and letting himself be fucked In the ass too? He was quite clearly gay as a maypole!

After everything Lexie did to him, I wouldn't have blamed him for beating her to death. Instead, he gives her a car and $20k?!

Reed was right, the plot for this was ludicrous.

You never know,

what a story will offer if you don't read it all. Turned out to be an enjoyable story.

Thank you satyrsbard keep writing.

@angelrider, are you saying that you NEVER had a mouth full of cum....

Leave out the MM sexual contacts! If you're going to do that, put it in a different section or declare it ahead of time. Ruins otherwise decent tales. One star.

Sad pathetic gay writer trying to deal with his denial issues by writing them out and posting them in public.

You sir need help but by now you've accepted who and what you are and most likely happily married to 26thGayCuck.

Story is not too bad. Some comments suck! LP

Decent story but a section on lexie being confronted would have been enjoyable

Clever scenario and fun read. It was missing the direct confrontation with the ex , needed to jave that

some of the dumbest shit I've ever read. it started bad but got worse and worse as it went on.

You checked all the boxes except for MC being a "part-time Navy SEAL" and "inventing this computer thingy worth millions." Other than that, the writer hit every single trope.

Sick shit

Promising at first, but after page 2, well, ruined story...

Rather surprised that there was no comment on the rope burns/scars on his neck from the aborted hanging.