All Comments on 'A Short Swing'

The story was good, but left me feeling that it was not finished, the ending being too abrupt and needing more insight into the future. It delves into real feelings and emotions and deserves a sequel rather than to leave any outcome to the reader's imagination. Pete

Feel-good sex well written with likeable characters that are very believable. Hot, too, of course.

She will either reciprocate your feelings but if she does not she should still continue your raptures. Nothing ventured, nothing gained. Thanks for writing, Techsan.

Hey, he found his soulmate. At least his fuckmate. Good for him and for her.