by ecrevelle
That's an interesting take. I'm a native English speaker so I'm not sure where that feeling comes from. I was consciously going for a kind of heightened reality feeling, so maybe that has something to do with it? In any case I don't think there are serious grammatical or vocabulary issues but please do let me know if you find any!
...but it had a slight ESL feel about it. Maybe it was just the boys' names, but I don't think that was all. Dunno, something just not quite right.
very hot story... kind of weird but still very hot. never done shrooms but would if it was like this lol