All Comments on 'A Shot in the Dark'

You lost me at the word nanites. I thought the shot would have an experimental chemical or something more conventional and less sci-fi. An uniquely erotic take on some current conspiracies though.

Not bad, although it could've been a little bit longer. Still, a pretty good story.

A few typos and stuff like that but you created such a hot story. I totally got a kick out of each one upping the other when it came to the VPN and the security hacking. Great job!

very nice. I particularly enjoy the disclaimer in the end :)

Any resemblance to real vaccines is purely coincidental.

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Thank you for your comments.

With regard to the word 'nanites', this is basically just handwaving - IMHO the story does not need a detailed scientific explanation to work. I actually wrote this story quite some time ago and if I would write it today I might replace the nanites with 5G-microchips, which would be more up-to-date but basically just another handwave.