by Br0kenD0ll
One woman blows up her own marriage to help another divorced woman? Just awful.
A fun sexcapade. Always enjoy hearing the inner thoughts and calculations of a sexy woman during intimate relations. Also I enjoyed the primal eroticism that comes from watching a passionate couple go at each other.
But there's a certain level of reality here that I find distracting. Would a single woman bed her best friend's husband under her friend's own roof while her friend was there? Would a happily married man with two children inseminate his wife's best friend with his wife asleep upstairs? And for both the single woman and the husband, wouldn't they fight harder to resist the decision to go for it?
Okay, maybe this single woman needs a recovery program from Nymphomaniacs Anonymous, and maybe the husband is a habitual philandering sleaze. But if that's the case, a little more back-grounding is needed to support the suspension of disbelief.
Regardless, a fun read.
I agree, it's hard to buy he'd do this. But the wiring is great and the sex is hot. It's just the setup that's distracting.
I kept waiting to find out that his wife had put him up to it to get her friend to stop slutting around for the wrong type of guy. Hot scene, though!