All Comments on 'A Sibling in Need Pt. 02'

A sibling love story should be just that. Introducing others is going to ruin this story. if they want to pledge to each other for life then thats how it should be and everyone else can suck it up. They want to make a baby together when married to someone else?? Crazy. I think the "normalizing" idea should be dropped as soon as she returns from Paris. Other than that I am enjoying your story so far.

Disappointing. Cole and Summers conversation about dating and eventually marrying other people. Two people truly in love would not be emotionally capable of having a relationship with another person. It would cause them so much emotional turmoil they would not be capable of sustaining a relationship with someone else at least until their love had died which could take years depending on how deep their love was. For siblings who develop an loving relationship I doubt that that love could die enough that they could form a relationship with someone else.

Nice transition chapter, but a little short. Good writing, but I expected a bit more heat.

A very good chapter! Thank you for keeping this going! An interesting place to stop, I hope there's more coming for this story. Thank you!

Another well written story and I enjoyed reading it, but some cracks in your plot are starting to show. You're portraying them as two people deeply in love but then have them flippantly saying they don't want a true relationship. That's serious disconnect with reality, despite all the complications that would come with that level of commitment. To have them marry others while planning to have a child under their spouses nose... Not the quality individuals you've shown us up until this point. Clearly, you're setting us up for Cole/Ashely shenanigans while she's in France but I just can't see two people that in love going down the path your selling. Still 5*, but I'm putting you on notice! LOL

unbelievable. they are that much in love but she wants to push him at her friend? I feel like if he loved her he would not sleep with her friend, and she would not sleep with someone else either. If the love is that strong, [and bro/sis love is usually very strong.], they will remain faithful to each other and find a way to make it work.

In my honest opinion the normalizing plan sucks. I don't see how they could do that when it seems like they're so in love with each other. It's a different idea but seems a bit to late in the timeline to introduce it. Other than that I think the story is awesome.

why do people gotta ruin a perfectly good storyline by suddenly wanting 2 people that are perfectly good together getting others involved rated 1 get the acts together and stop this stuff sheesh

they need to end up together, maybe the family accepts the together? Maybe she finds out while in Paris she is pregnant?

What the hell. I loved the first part. Now "Normalize" Crap. You don't know about incest love.

I enjoyed the first part and the direction it was heading then you went and ruined it with the second part with the need to normalize. The bit about rent and expenses made it sound like a business transaction between the siblings. It started to seem like a fuck buddy situation. I cant see a situation where two siblings take a huge step in becoming lovers and not be willing to try and sacrifice at all costs to building a future together. I enjoyed your story telling and writing but feel let down and disappointed with this turn in direction. I really hope another part comes along to right the ship where siblings figure out they cant let go of jealousy and stay monogomous to each other with a future

Waiting for the next installment.

As others have said, not thrilled about the direction this part took, but still looking forward to the next chapters.

Middleson and Anonymous91, this is my story. I believe in normalizing and how hot it can be when siblings fuck despite having a wife and husband. And you never know, maybe one of the siblings decides they can't handle the other fucking someone else and they tell them so? I have plenty of ideas. All future chapters of this story will be posted on my Patreon pg. Head to patreon and eroticabyphineas to subscribe and find the new chapters

So Cole with the whore Ashley while the dumb bitch sister goes abroad