All Comments on 'A Sight to Behold'

An elegantly written little piece with an underlying edge of tension and desire, nicely observed.

It's a shame Lit readers generally don't like the short 750 word format, one can find little gems in the shortest of short vignettes - like this one.

Beautifully written. With few words you transport the reader into the church and really into the inner life of the woman you observe who is drastically under-fulfilled. The perceptiveness and cherishing of the narrator though fiercely erotic seems strangely appropriate to the sanctity of church. Lovely job on this.

Subtle, sensual, perceptive and very well written.

Well written. Vivid and concise.