by grimbous
You have a great gift for capturing personalities that feel real, and are not flat card board cut outs. It's a beautiful story of emotions. Well done, I binge read everything, can't wait for more!
The whole story captivates you and you really root Avery. The setting is described so well I can feel the chilly morning air and salt smell and the warm orange glow of the sunsets. The characters are so inique and so alive. BRAVO! Please ride this story out forever! I can't wait for the next installment.
I'm loving this story line!!!! So much back story and depth of character!!! So much world building !!!! You are not a writer,,, you're an ARTIST !!! Such a good author... My new favorite on this website... Thanks for all the hard work you've put in to this story!!! Hoping to continue reading the next chapter soon.
fkkkkkk this is the last chapter so far. i got soooo hooked on the story i cannot believe it.... noooo