All Comments on 'A Single Moment Ch. 03'

by Dreamweaver594

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ender2k2kender2k2kalmost 7 years ago
This story is developing nicely .

I like the 3 main characters and look forward to seeing how you grow their relationships. Deserves 5 stars but voting appears to be disabled. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

5 stars ,what an amazing read thank you, looking toward the next installment.

timothynoullettimothynoulletalmost 7 years ago
awesome Story

I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this story series and hope that you will continue to write more chapters. I also enjoyed Once upon a bite so sweet. I hope you will continue to add chapters to all your stories, and I look forward to reading them as you complete them. Thank you Very Much!!!!!

dca5347dca5347almost 7 years ago
Ben

I just wish Ben got to top sometimes :(

Dreamweaver594Dreamweaver594almost 7 years agoAuthor
Ben topping

Return to episode one, Ben does recprocate Rachel. And will be back on top again in the next episode. Thanks to all who've supported my work. More to come..DW

ajignatsajignatsover 6 years ago
Wonderful reading

I love this story and can’t wait for the next chapter.

I would love to be a bottom for those girls in the real world.

LisaBrooksLisaBrooksover 5 years ago
A Class In Design

Sounds like the girls and Ben are comfortable but I fear trouble lurks not far beyond the comfort zone! Being exposed leads to gossip and questions! I do love the story line!

SissyBoy1WarszawaSissyBoy1Warszawaabout 1 year ago

If I wanted that to happen in real life, I'd love to be Ben to Rachel and Sarah. You have wonderfully described the experiences of the three heroes in their everyday lives, as well as their erotic or perhaps more fitting love intimacies, frolicking in bed or in the bathroom... But will these happy moments suddenly be interrupted by some drama that will destroy everything that conquers my heart so much. I am very much looking forward to the further adventures of Ben, Rachel and Sara. Regards SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. Regards SissyBoy from Warsaw (Poland). 📝👩❤️👩‍🦳❤️🧒

Jakbym chciała aby tak było w rzeczywistym życiu, bardzo bym chciała być jako Ben dla Rachel i Sary. Wspaniale opisałeś doświadczenia zarówno w życiu codziennym trójki bohaterów, jak ich erotyczne a może bardziej pasuje miłosne zbliżenia, harce czy to w łóżku czy w łazience... Tylko czy te szczęśliwe chwile nagle nie przerwie jakiś dramat który zniszczy wszystko co tak podbija moje serce. Już bardzo czekam na dalsze losy Bena, Rachel i Sary. Pozdrawiam SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska. Pozdrawiam SissyBoy z Warszawy (Polska). 📝👩❤️👩‍🦳❤️🧒

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