All Comments on 'A Single Step'

Enjoyed it.

A lovely story featuring an unusual protagonist for whom you've made me feel a great deal of affection. There's a nice wry humour to some of this, too, which is always welcome. Excellent stuff.

As always, a well-written and moving story!

You sure do put together a great story !!

It's Ann Douglas, of course she puts together a good story. She is one of the best authors I have read in a while.

I have always found petite Asian women with small breasts extremely sexy. I have never been attracted to large breasts. This story made me masturbate and come. You are an artist. :)

Ann, this is a well developed story with great cross cultural views. Very erotic and the wait for the climax so to speak was fantastic.

Once again you have outdone yourself, Ann. Your stories are the best!

such a really good tale - I adore stories about mature asian ladies and this one hit all the right notes. I do hope that Mrs Chen explores her desires further with young Patrick. Does she become more matronly and dominant, telling him just how to pleasure her? Does her more ample sister / mother / aunt join in to also taste Patrick's desires?

A good elaborate work of fiction, covering sexual aspects of diversified cultures.

Ann you are becoming one of my favorite writers! Great build up and climax! Hoping to read more about these two moving to a more permanent relationship. Thank you!

This story was so engrossing one best EVER.

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Started reading all of your stories-- one by one. Since one of your specialties seems to be "older woman/younger man" stories, this one was particularly delightful. And your descriptions of the grocery store were so well-drawn that I visualized them in living color. "Nobody does it better... make me feel sorry for the rest."

Recently found your stories and just started reading them. I certainly enjoy your writing style and enjoy the younger/older concept. Looking forward to reading the other stories. This is one of the better stories I have read in awhile. Please keep up the great work.

this is one of the best stories i read on this site i hope that you continue with this.maybe you could write where they actually fall in love with each other

You need to continue this.Lynn introducing Patrick to her sons as her new boyfriend

I must say you have an excellent writing skill coupled with the ability to tell a story that sucks my right in (no pun intended). Too bad I can't give you more than five stars it was that good. And once again I must say that your characters were well drawn as was the setting. Some years ago I dated a woman whose mother owned a country store and lived above it like Lynn did. Therefore it was a nice surprise to find a connection with your story and my own life. Loved it, looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Ted

Thanks so much for sharing this very entertaining and enjoyable story.

A story that held my interest from start to finish. Character development was well done and in keeping with the knowledge of these kinds of relationships. Glad that they got together in the end and hopefully the relationship continued for quite a while.

Very well written, quite enjoyable. The quality is consistent with Mrs. Douglas's prior work. Nicely done.

It's been a while since I've read any of your stories and I find that I miss them. I know I'll enjoy whichever of your stories I read and this one is no exception. The Single Step is very well done and has a happy ending, yet kind of leaves us to decide if it ends or continues. The fact is that both Lynn and Patrick have shared something special is so rewarding. Thank again for your wonderful stories.

I enjoyed the story as always. I like the view the author takes and shares the intensity of her thoughts.

Delightful read!

Not only an excellent cross generational story, but cross cultural/racial as well. I love the fact that you didn't dwell on the fact that she was Asian, or make it a fetish attraction, instead starting it from the point of a kindred friendship. I know this story is one of your earlier postings to Literotica, but it's still one of the best reads in the Mature category and earned a rarely given 5-star rating.

Very readable, excellent narrative, fine writing.

I have seen your name for years, so i decided to read some of your stories that seem less frequently now. You are a really good writer, like authors of books. I am going to read more of your stories. I want to thank you for your stories, while you are still on here.

I feel like I have stumbled into the VIP section of the library of erotica. My mind is so erotically charged I need to take a break but will be back to sample more of your delightful wares.

Cheers, Andy

Excellent. Your writing brings me in from the start, the characters are interesting, as are your stories. Love your work.

Absolutely fantastic. I agree that "more than a handful is a waste". Thanks. 5+ stars.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Very good character development!

It doesn't matter which story of Ann Douglas I read. Her wonderful language transits each story into a very erotic head-cinema. Absolutely great.

Wow! Really beautiful. Such talent.

The right person in the right place at the right time to help her move forward!

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