It really felt like you were setting up for a good story and then it just... ended. The writing that is there is fantastic, but it could be more fleshed out.
Nice to meet you all <3 Writer, photographer, and artist. I make fetish content mostly on commission since I do have other non-sexy stuff in my life, but have been considering setting up a Patreon so I can be more flexible with the topics I'm writing on.