All Comments on 'A Sissy Fairy Tale'

by AmandaSwallows

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RustyghRustyghabout 8 years ago
Bravisima

Undoubtedly should be deemed a Classic in the literal sense. As erotica or standalone literature I can truly say that I read this story forgetting in awe to be critical in its structure and composition. I found that I enjoyed it as much as any other fairy tale I've ever read by any author including all the icons of literary renown. This is the first story I have read on this website in all the years I've been reading that I have been so impressed. Truly this must be your finest hour. As of this moment, your most ardent fan. Russell Hammond

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hysterically funny

Written by a twelve year old. With an ending by Disney. Barf.......

Raven1747Raven1747about 8 years ago
Wonderful!

I love your story! You took the idea of a fairy tale to the next level. Forget about the anonymous nay-sayers. This was pretty much perfect!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Slumbertime indeed!

I see what you mean by sweet dreams. This piece of shit would put anyone to sleep. Who needs Ambien or Sominex which you've got this study in boring?

cali_fraecali_fraeabout 8 years ago

Really does have the feel of a fairy tale & was a very pleasent change of pace from the other stories in this section. There's only one very minor plot hole, the dragon tells the prince that his fire was stolen by the sorcerer & yet he starts burning the castle to the ground when he next appears. I'm going to choose to believe that upon the sorcerers death that curse was lifted too thus restoring the dragons fire. I know that really is nit picking but it can be resolved with an extra line or two. A thouroughly enjoyable read

isadoreisadoreabout 8 years ago
well done

such a great tale, worthy of bedtime stories everywhere. i got transported to the land of dragons and centaurs right along with the words you wrote. Very good job and damn the anonymous critiques, they hide in the shadows.

DawnTransDawnTransabout 8 years ago
Loved this story.....More please???

I have to say I never expected this story to be so enticing. I hope you write more stories of love and adventure.

yukonnightsyukonnightsalmost 8 years ago
Really Great !

This is one of the most imaginative and well crafted fairy tales I have ever read! As I read it, I kept thinking what a great movie it would make...too bad mainline audiences aren't quite ready for it though :) Truly, a wonderful talent well used. I say 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
HOLY SHIT

God this was so good, and one of the rare cases where the story doesnt try to demean or portray a feminine Male as "lesser"

Plus I loved the fantasy part of it too

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A Fabulous Fairy Tale...

I have read many stories her on literotica, but I have to say that this is one of the very best once, just fantastic and now I'm really looking forward to read the other stories posted by AmandaSwallows... :-)

xoxo

Michael R.

Denmark

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

very sweet a nice ending

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