by sissyneko
oh my god i love this story and i cannot wait to read the next chapter ,i get so turned on reading it ,i want a daddy like that .
I tried reading it, but it was so weird with the family references.
I could not even read the whole thing and than I clicked on the other one accidently on my smart phone.
Please in the future use anon. names.
Thanks!
I am beginning to really like this story...it's getting really good...please just don't stop.
Your storie is very well written.
The best storie i have read so far.
You should consider writing more
Well done..the plot developing well..again well written and sure fire page turner or mouse mover.. and very easy on the eye to visualise all that is going on..you have the gift for teasingly sexy erotica..
A suspense thriller story. The sex is almost secondary. And I think a great hook to want to keep reading.
You develop the scenario of Billy's story in an interesting way, showing how much his fear of Mr. Morgan can force him into complete bankruptcy, submission and humiliation.
Where did Terry come from all of a sudden? Is this Mr. Morgan's daughter? And why does he visit Billy in prison? I can understand showing Junior's character again and having him fight through law school for Billy. However, by interweaving various threads like this, you create confusion and often make the whole thing unstable. However, I am very interested in what happened to Billy and how he will manage to return to normal life? I'm still shocked by the lack of interest from Billy's real parents, or maybe they are also under Mr. Morgan's supervision? 📖👸🏻🧒🏻❤️🧑🏻❓👩🏻🔗👿👨🏻.
ps. Sorry for any mistakes and linguistic inaccuracies, but I don't speak English.
SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 📖👩🏻🦳❤️🧒🏻👸🏻.
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Ciekawie rozwijasz scenariusz historii Billy'ego, ukazujesz jak bardzo strach jego przed Panem Morganem jest w stanie zmusić go do całkowitej upadłości, uległości i poniżenia.
Skąd się nagle wzięła Terry? Czy to jest córka Pana Morgana? I dlaczego odwiedza Billy'ego w więzieniu? Mogę zrozumieć pokazanie znów postać Juniora, oraz podjęcie przez niego walki po przez studia prawnicze o Billy'ego. Jednak przeplatając tak ze sobą różne wątki robisz zamieszanie i często nie stabilność całości. Bardzo jednak interesuje Mnie co się stało z Billym i jak uda się Mu powrócić do normalnego życia? Wciąż szokuje Mnie brak zainteresowania prawdziwych rodziców Billy'ego, a może Oni też są pod nadzorem Pana Morgana? 📖👸🏻🧒🏻❤️🧑🏻❓👩🏻🔗👿👨🏻.
ps. Przepraszam za błędy i niedokładności językowe ale nie znam języka angielskiego.
SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska. 📖👩🏻🦳❤️🧒🏻👸🏻.