by silkstockingslover
I found it interesting that Sarah and Joey kept having “normal” conversations throughout their fucking. Also, if he has a thick cock, emphasize that in the pics. Thanks!
WOW, what a HOT STORY. And, as noted, the illustrations really were HOTHOTHOT!!!
Illustrations definitely increases the erotic value of the story. Keep going on and on so that we can come (cum) on and on.
Even more rushed than the first. And the illustrations don't do much for me, but they're not distracting either...
I didn't read much of this part of the story. I prefer your stories in text as the pictures are better.
UncertainT.
I found all the poorly rendered pictures distracting which is why I can only give it a 3 out 5 I wish I could give it a 2.5 out of 5 but I can't
Great job on this one. Really loved the pics, helps picturing everything that is going on. Would be a lot better with higher detail.
Way to keep us, I mean Sarah and Joey, cumming! So hot! Loved the pics too, just wish they were more graphic or better yet, real.
Good story til the illustrations jumped in, at least that is my opinion, great till then and thanks for sharing the story with us. I know writing is much harder to do than most people understand.
Not voting, but not enjoying the pictures. Stopped on the first page as the pictures in my head were way better and I felt so disappointed.. Not going to read any further, sorry.
As always, well written by an author on top of her genre. Salacious smut. Loving lust. Good combo.
I liked it as I like most brother/sister stories. I wonder, however, about those editors. If they are the same as proof readers, they need to do a better job. There’s almost always typos and often the illustrations don’t match the wording. For example in this story the sister was to have very blue eyes, but the pics have brown eyes. And, in one passage she is said to have her right leg up but the pic shows her left leg up. Not a big problem but those things should be caught in proofing. Looking forward to the next in the series.
Somehow it wasn’t too hot and exciting; not quite sure why since there was a lot of sex. Maybe the scenes were too short to allow the images to register. Looking forward to the cuming party.
Loved the story and the illustrations, but I got a chuckle with Joey wearing his glasses while pussy munching and 69ing Sarah. From experience, you can't do either well when wearing glasses... just a thought for future illustrations :)
Omg Jasmine, so absolutely depraved and fucked up, you just get better and better. Just wish that you would use the word cunt a bit more. I absolutely adore cunt in every way, eating it, fucking it and doing both at the same time. I never get enough, the more I get the more I want. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc’s UK.
Hot. Would love to have a sister like her. Ready to fuck at a drop of a pair of pants.
Well written. Enjoyed the pics. The one fellow that said there was too many pics. Distracting, Hell yes. If you don’t want to look at them, it’s a new no brainer – –Don’t look at them jack ass
Again you did an awesome job the details and characters, at first I was afraid the joking between the siblings was not the same but as the story went on it got back to it. I think they covered every position in the Kama Sutra and then some...LOL
I have read stories that are 30 chapters long each chapter is 9-15 pages long, it took days, I begged for a picture just to break up the endless words. Yours were cute and definitely showed his geek side and her sexy side.
very good Thank you
As you so accurately stated, It is a sequel! Does George Orwell continue reintroducing Smith every chapter?! Or whatever novel you care to reference? Of course not! If you read the story in order, it makes perfect sense and still is very well explained!
Regarding the illustrations, I had to laugh at the first couple as Joey is wearing one of the nerdiest shirts ever made! Lol! The haircut, the glasses, all perfect nerd! It reminded me and everyone else of someone they went to school with. And if it didn’t, guess who was your school nerd?!
I understand you do these for your own enjoyment and that’s fine, really! <g>. But the boobs are a bit too big for me on his sister. I like big boobs and large areola , but those boobs would be cumbersome and I dread knowing how many back aches the poor gal has had. I know it’s fantasy, but still, the more realistic it is the hotter it is. Anyway, please consider that my bit of hopefully constructive comment.
Now these complaints... I am guessing when you immediately start with hot sex they cannot finish the story with uhhh a smeared I -pad screen, and that’s part of their issue. Hee hee
Was a big fan of the first one. Didn't like the animations. The whole point of these stories was that you use your imagination. This felt like reading a silly cartoon. Keep it up though. You're definitely talented.
The shitty 3D animation ruins it. The first one was considerably better.
Can’t wait for the evening with Jane.
Amazing series.
I am exhausted!
Keep the action cumming!
If you have not done so all ready, in IE, at the bottom right of the "page", set the size to 250, this will increase the font and image size, presenting you with a much larger size to view.
I love incest stories. I was in one for 11 yrs. with one of my Aunts. My best ever love and GREAT SEX!! This is the first illustrated story for me and I really enjoyed it. I look forward to reading more of your tales. I am an older gent now(72) but I still enjoy life to the fullest! Thank you for a great story of incestuous love it brought back VERY good memories!! :>))
I love Halloween stories,
I am worn out.
Every baby brother wishes they could fuck their beautiful big sister.
And let her take his virginity.
I am worn out
I made my sister duplicate all the positions... cummed all over her and got her pregnant. The tit fucking and blowjob felt the best.
Love your stories and writing style. There were a few too many illustrations but what imaginitive positions. Hope to read more about Sarah and Joey.
Sorry but the drawings spoilt it for me, to much like a pore quality comics your stories are better than that.
So after finding this submission, I went into my sister’s room and slid down on her bed to show her this on my iPad. She read it all and looked at all the illustrations. She then got up, stripped out of her clothes, undressed me, and we started to duplicate the story. It took us three days to perform all the sex but it was awesome. We were going to separate colleges, but at the end of the semester, I will change to her school and we’re moving into an apartment together. She says she has slutty friends that will enjoy my cock. We are going to duplicate all of your stories, including both of us fucking our mom. Thanks for writing and the illustrations.
im Gay and love face fucking a Girl or Guy with my balls hitting there nose and face while im in there mouth , and all the positions were fun
I enjoy your stories more when they don't have the images. The more images, the less I enjoy the story. There are a couple of reasons why this is true.
One is that I'm here to read, and the images just get in the way. Part two of this series was nearly unreadable, with sometimes a single line of text between two pictures.
The other reason is that while I appreciate the quality of the images, I don't particularly care for the content. For me, too many writers here are obsessed with huge breasts and that trend seems reflected in your women in the images: their tits are so big in relation to their bodies that they look deformed to me. I do realize that I'm probably in the minority. :-)
But that's really just a quibble. I just find all of the images distracting, even when the women are what I think is hot.
For me, the perfect female body is about 32B-23-34, 5'6" 105 pounds. But I realize that doesn't work for most, and such descriptions may be distracting or a turnoff for readers, which is what I feel when I read about a 44DD with a huge butt.
I've actually considered writing a story with no descriptions of what the women look like, and instead just use terms like "perfectly sized breasts" for example, and allow the readers to supply their own ideal images. But as with all my story ideas, few of them reach completion due to my innate laziness.
But please keep up the good writing; I've enjoyed many of your stories.
I apologize for the Anonymous, but I’m unable to log in, and haven’t been able to get help from the site. My user name here is homlyp.
Wow ! Great story.This the best story I've read in a long time. Kept me hard all through the story....my barometer for story ratings. Thank you so much. Keep the great stories coming. The pictures were also beautiful.
Amazing story and illustrations. I'm curious though, how were the illustrations made?
The illustrations really bring this story to life - a great addition.
Any chance you could add another showing Sarah in her full Harley Quinn outfit that she wore in chapter 1?
Well worth 5 Stars !
Rapier
loved the erotic interplay and the illustrations really made the storyline "pop" for me deliciously yummy!
When a supposedly lesbian girl comments on a bunch of sex positions in a male voice, I have no choice but to bookmark this for future reference. Yup, I derived probably unexpected value of this, but I believe there is.
It's far from perfect for any use, but is more than fine for either, me liked.
CGI is indeed generic, but I happen to know how insanely, ridiculously lot of work it takes to make it right, so actually cuddos for a great work, and this story is impossible without illustrations, they are absolutely essential here. Of course, we all would prefer real artwork, but it should be understood it requires to book a full working day of an actual artist for each picture then, on the very minimum, independently of the techniques used. This is probably the best way a person with great imagination but little drawing skills can get close to something usable, and I have no problems to accept that.
Did I mention more? Love the storyline. Love the upcoming chapters. As some said, there are only so many ways to write a story, especially an erotic one. You do a great job trying to keep things fresh. Probably even better than you think. A suggestion? Since an alumni cheerleader submission is mentioned, use that. Mom seems insecure, but maybe mom has a former cheerleader sister who can use her, son, and daughter. Or perhaps Jane's mother is an alumni who decides to use Jane as her daughter playtoy, then brings in the bro and sis too. Think about it. And did I say more? Well then, more please.
The cgi looks bad and really distracts from the text, ruining the reading flow, would be better story without pictures. I couldn't make myself finish it.
If it were real pictures one at the beginning and end to set the mood wouldn't be amiss, any more is detrimental.
Please upload a plaintext version also without cgi.
We want more and asap :-) And I say a big YES to all your next chapter suggestions. And I do mean ALL as in I wanna read them all hehe. Please keep em 'cumming' :-)
Hi
Part 3 is in the works for a July release.
Ps: it will be illustrated.
You promised several additional chapters in your series "A Sister's Surprise", but it has been over 3 months and you have written four unrelated stories since then. When are you going to write the next chapter?
This is a great series cannot wait to read the next instalment just wish they were all illustrated
Great story! I love how big sis is not only "taking care of brother", but also setting him up with a possible girlfriend. I HOPE you can continue this series!
Another truly hot story from my favroite author on here!! Can't wait for more!!
PICTURES JUST doesn't work .it takes the imagination out of it.chapter1 is okay but this is almost like a list of sexual positions.
Dear Jaz
May I offer a suggestion for your consideration. Think about a story told only in illustrations with captions. Your recent illustrations have been excellent and extremely descriptive and could carry the story with only a (three or four line) caption below which simply fills in detail beyond the illustration. And of course continue also your prose only stories with all the details and character development which you have been so good at doing - i.e. -two different styles and approaches to your work. Each with your usual highly erotic results. Long-time fan.
Love, Jack Auff / Can.
Beyond the chapters you've already outlined, I think Joey should get left alone at the sorority one day when his sister unexpectedly gets called away. Of course the girls will do their best to take advantage of him. ^^
Not bad but it wasn't quite your your usual. And I'm not sure Illustrated works
The first chapter seemed okay but even page one of this one lost me quickly.
If the sister is literally willing to fuck anyone and everyone then the incest looses its taboo and appeal.
Quite the tale. Really enjoyed it. I like how you've made them close.
what a truly wonderful chapter , Love reading your stories they make you want to be part of them. Am looking forward to lot more from you. Keep up the great work
As usual, a hot and wonderful story. I wish I had a brother with a big cock to show me all the positions you had in the story. can't wait for the next part.
Just finished reading part one (again for about the 100th time) and straight to this chapter. Both are still so hot and beautifully wrote.
I'm glad you kept the feet play in this story for all us who like feet! Love the pictures that was a great addition!
Part of me wants him to say no and just fuck his sister no one else. 5* and again my favourite written :)
If another chapter is published I'd personally like to read the Mom 3 some
Every brother's dream...a hot big titted sister who loves to fuck, and had friends who love to fuck too.
Grammar nicely done, and spelling too. The illustrations were awesome.
You have me hooked, more soon??
Characters types are limited, story lines are limited and I think you do the best to keep us entertained. I mean come on there is only so many ways to fry an egg. I look for your new stories every day because I like what you write.
As for your next installments, I think you should try for all four. I love when kids take control of mom and I love when students take control of teachers. The cheerleader story line would just be an added bonus.
And yes, I am one of the fans that Anonymous likes to refer to. So you keep writing and I will keep reading.
its great with the illustrations please consider using in all the upcoming chapters
This story is so fucking hot I came without touching myself the pics made the story even hotter than it was, some of the positions were only just believable, Sarah having been a cheerleader was the only thing that made them believable.
FANTASTIC Thanks
Jasmine, I've liked your stories for quite some time. They're intriguing, risque, raunchy, sexy, spankable, and also loving. I hope you keep doing what you do. My only complaint is the illustrations in my opinion take away from the writing because they break them up and cause you to pause the reading. However, to each their own, as the saying goes. So Thank you for your time and effort. I check back here on an almost weekly basis to see if you've uploaded a new story.
Another great story, every time I see you posted a new one, my cock gets hard and starts dripping precum. Keep writing, no matter if it's illustrated or not.
the writing is okish and about 4*, the 'illustrations' however... seriously let some kind person buy you a colouring book and keep writing and keep your hobbies separate or there may even be a site for people that would love to be able to draw, no idea
anyway, you killed it
Please rethink not illustrating the next installment as you have 3 or 4 of the characters already drawn, if the cheerleader coach is involved at that party.
Love your stories. Will your next story be illustrated would love to see A Mom & Son Affair sequel with pics. Your the best writer on Lit right now