All Comments on 'A Sisterly Seduction'

Was good but where it broke off was problematic for me. Might have been 5 stars after the kitchen talk.

Super Sexy. Very hot. Need more chapters. Great work

Sounds like a part 2 is needed.

I think you meant "formative" years...

GRRReat !!!!! I love the story line and where it's headed

I really liked it up to the point where mom found them. She is 'different' lately....wearing short skirt etc.....she is going to get with the 2 kids I know it. I really don't like stories of incest where the 'couple' get with another person in the family. It takes away from the feelings developing between the original couple. Just me...if the mom gets with the kids then I likely won't read it. However this story was pretty good.

Wrong words are just as bad, if not worse, than misspelled words. The errors are glaring, had you proofed your story, you would have seen them. If you don't care enough to proofread your story, why should we waste time reading it?

Needs proofing, story-line consistency and pacing. Otherwise it's just crappy FAP material.

5 Stars! That was hot and fun! Can’t wait for chapter 2.

The vocal exchange between sibs sounds as if lifted from a crappy fapp novel or 2-bit porno film! "Fuck my young, little, tight pussy?" Bleah!

sounded worst then a bad porno. I knew from the start the dumbass bitch sister was going to get them caught. one star and that is too good for this shitty story.

Of course you will notice your toughest critiques are Anonymous. You made the effort and it was hot. You do owe your readers a best effort which includes proof reading and spell checker but I hope you don't get discouraged by the nay-Sayers. Just read lots of other works and hang in there. You'll get a lot better and one day you'll be a favorite. Hey, and thanks for sharing with us.

I liked the story, it had a good flow and kept me interested. As for those that haven't written a story and feel like they are a know-it-all about story writing, try your hand at it and see just how difficult it is to keep all those things you say you found wrong, and write one that doesn't.

Good fucking!

Seuls ceux qui ont des soeurs sexy peuvent comprendre le tabou, l'excitation profonde de l'inceste... Merci de l'ecriture cat piur ma part, on rejette tous les récits frère soeur tellement je les baises avec beaucoup de sperme à distribuer

I loved the story, I can't wait to see what happens when you wrote the next one, I am sure it will be excellent

I loved it! I want the mother to get her share in the next one.

One of the best reads today. Excited for the next part!

A very good story but, it needs and ending. I see that you have written more stories but, this one needs and ending

CINCO ESTRELLAS!

Any next chapter soon? Hope so