All Comments on 'A Sister's Desires'

Well written and most enjoyable, More please|

If Rick and Brenda felt using condoms was for safety why wouldn't Rick use a condom with Jayme. Otherwise pretty good story

Very lovely story. It a bit refreshing to see a sister approach her brother to feel love instead of just lust over his huge cock.

Very nice!

very well written, can't wait for more

Almost good but the dialogue is strange and unnatural, not quite credible. He should have licked his sister's pussy but didn't, seems like you were rushing to finish the story.

Really unfair. And really selfish. The least he could have done for the sister is give her more orgasms. She deserved to be worshipped.

Young love filled with love and caring.

Hope you add more chapters.

I wish to have a sister like her.

Just a little CONSTRUCTIVE criticism:

"How do you want to do this," he asked hesitantly of his sister? The entire sentence IS NOT the question.

Here is the correct placement of the question mark:

"How do you want to do this?" he asked, hesitantly, of his sister.

Great feeling, this one was definitely all about love. I’m sure there w ill be encores and Rick will get after his Sister’s rug.

I must say one thing…who let all the English teachers in here?! And everyone of them is “anonymous “. You Mr. Ms. Nr. Anonymous have taken anal punctuation to a new extreme!

The author pounds out @7,200 words for our enjoyment, receives ZERO compensation for posting it here, and all you can do is bitch about the placement of a question mark!? No time to say a thing about his efforts, the feelings the story evoked in you, nothing!

Your total disregard for the human effort and the generosity to put it here, gratis, is disgusting.

To anyone else who just read this, my apologies . I just get tired of those who have to walk on others to feel good about themselves.

Al

Nice brother sister incest story. 5/5

What were her "skimpy panties"