All Comments on 'A Sister's Love'

"And this one was coming fast. The sights and sounds of his mom riding his cock hard and fast," silly mistake really an editor could help.

I'd love to see more chapters to this story.

I'd never have guessed that your first language wasn't English. This is well written and engaging. There is the odd error but on the whole this is very good. Well done!

His mom suddenly was riding him there.

5 Stars. Part 2 please.

Needs proofreading.

examples:

He's a spice boy.

"poking at the slit where some of his sticky cumin had oozed out"

His sister is his mother.

"The sights and sounds of his mom riding his cock hard and fast"

your bio spiked my intrest and your story added depth, love it

5 Stars. Great story, got distracted for a moment at the reference of 'mom' but overall, it was great. Both Dante and I can't wait for her ass.

Their parents must have emphasized sharing

"...with small round but luscious tits..."

WRONG! WRONG! WRONG!!!!!

Should read: "...with small round AND luscious tits..."

Hummm fuck sister very good

Juvenile crap.

Damn, I wish I would have had a sister like you!!!!!!

A very well written story. Please keep sharing your stories and experances with your son.

Wow Bria an awesome story just loved it all, it's such a turn on to her a woman usebthe words you did, rock on girl

FANTASTIC story. Made me want to be Dante. I wish I had a woman treat me like that.