All Comments on 'A Slave in Imperial Rome Pt. 04'

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Vintage_DMVintage_DMover 3 years ago
nicely ...

composed ,,, very smooth flow along all the story lines.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Such a good installment, I'm relieved Rebecca did not object to her cousin joining them in bed. Can't wait for the next chapter!

SaintdragonslayerSaintdragonslayerover 3 years ago

What a great series this is turning out to be! Top marks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Another great installment, can't wait until Rebekah is face down biting a pillow while Marcus fucks her in the ass. Then he'll start knocking her up just to remind her of her place. It will be interesting to see how an innocent young bride fits into all this when she finds out her husband is using slaves as his side-pieces. I hope he puts her in her place and divides his time between his women.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Keep writing, this story line has great potential. Along with the good spacing and excellent readability.

Please continue

Vintage_DMVintage_DMover 3 years ago
looking ....

checking back and ... no, nothing new up yet. yet looking for the next chapter. soon ???

cerrotorrecerrotorreover 3 years agoAuthor
Working on it

Probably about two or so weeks. Stay tuned ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Lost direction. I'm out if here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

this is the first threesome i enjoued reading rebekkah is a potential dominatrix marcus though fucks her cousin but with rebekkah in his mind heart amd soul his loyality his attraction solely lives in rebekkah

prior to reading it i usually avoided threesome stories due to the lack of their intimacy but this one gave me another perspective

brilliant 5 stars

please keep writing

Horseman68Horseman68over 2 years ago
Great.

This story, far losing direction, just gains more and more momentum and complexity.

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