All Comments on 'A Slice off a Cut Loaf'

GREAT STORY! I HOPE YOU ARE PLANNING ON DOING A SEQUEL TO IT. GOOD LUCK AND GOOD WRITING.

That. Was. Hot! More please.

Great story, everymans dream of a mature lady to pleasure

HOT!!!! I dream of having the same experience with my MIL. I came sooo hard reading this that my hot cum load splashed all over my own face. Crazy good story!

Great story. Please continue.

When he's nailing the door closed I thought of him nailing her backdoor. Hehe

this story is crying out for more chapters

There are three more chapters to come. Thanks for all the comments

MMmmmmm YEAHHhhhh !!!! 5 stars,,...!!!!

Wow! Love the stockings! More!!

Good premise.

But seriously lacks details. And lacks tension. Sex just zooms ahead as if there's a race that has to be run in a hurry.

Needed much more in the way of preliminaries/foreplay/discovery of and with each other.

Needed dialog about what each wanted the other to do, and what each wanted to do to/with the other.

Three stars.

Old lady. has a hot pussy. And loves to use it share it

I hope this keeps up - with more details and better descriptions of the buildup. She's HOT! I'd love to hae her for my MIL.