All Comments on 'A Slow Descent Pt. 02'

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cindylynn34cindylynn34about 9 years ago

we cant have her on the pilll , she needs to start forgetting to take it..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great erotic story.

Hot, exciting and suspenseful. A lot of detail and buildup, that I usually don't like, but it really works with this story. Please post chapter 3 soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Love this story!

Hope Helena gets her own tattoo and a black baby too!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Give us more!

Helena and her female employees all need matching tattoos and baby bumps!

TwentysevenTwentysevenabout 9 years ago
Well Written

This is very well written. Don't spoil it by lapsing into the usual clichés.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
she shouldnt feel guilty

she should get her spade tattoo showing that she black owned now and never let her lil dicked whiteboi husband touch her again

he can either get with the program or catch a gat in the face

stupid cracka reparations are here

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
did she get the whole thing ???

You never wrote if he gave her the whole cock, she should have a busted womb, and a dislocated cervix, and a nice little round belly, a husband that she can go back to after 10k leaves her with a round belly and disappeared.

Kerry312Kerry312about 9 years ago
LOL

AL you fucking aholes O she got black cock and proabley some type of VD HOPE AIDS and she can tell it to her children if husband finds out because the black guys in this story sound like typical cock hounds if it moves fuck it

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
just another AUTO-BIO

of his wife liking monkey dicks better than his

RanDog025RanDog025over 2 years ago

Damn, what a fucked up imagination!

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