All Comments on 'A Small Souvenir'

Thank you, daddy!

I love the cheating element. Ugh. Us younger girls are always better.

Please do a sequel where an adult Hayley joins them

[23.10.22]

Excellent version of the 'lost' daughter/daddy trope.

Love the inclusion of 'genetic sexual attraction' as a reason for their coupling and the conflict with his wife.

Plus having Holly and Matt name their son Spencer (my name) is cool too.

11/10!!!!!

[23.10.22]

I really enjoyed your take on the 'lost' daughter/daddy trope.

The introduction of 'genetic sexual attraction' (a real thing B.T.W.) and the conflict with his wife were well done.

Also Holly and Matt naming their son Spencer is a plus in my book (it's my name).

11/10!!!!!

Very well written, and pretty sexy. The damage done to the family was really hard to read.

Loved this. From the back story to the main plot... kept me hooked the entire time!

You got something major wrong. Americans call them blinds not shades .

Just to help you out before you make a dumb statement like that .

EXCELLENT,🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

An excellent introductory (believable) backstory, with a plausible main section section, the scene that caused the separation and divorce were extremely realistic and bitter, the church wedding seemed a little over the top, a register office would have been more feasible. On the whole a delightful story well worth reading.

Beautifully crafted, prepared and written, with an appropriate mix of British and American language considering the scenario.

Wow so hot. I loved this from start to finish. Made you so fucking wet I came three times while reading it.