All Comments on 'A Smokey Affair'

Moved a bit slow m the beginning, but overall was a pretty good story.

Would love to read more about these two. Thank you.

A gentle, loving story. The transition from friendship to love was so sweet, so gentle, and there was no mockery or insult. I loved it! Marissas consideration for Lawrence turned this from a jerk story to a life story—well done!

Excellent! I actually read your second story first, then this one. The way you easily flow your characters from masculine to feminine roles so smoothly is wonderful. Just two people, enjoying each other without too much conscious concern...very sexy!

I really loved this story. Especially the shift to the feminine language. Whew. Yummy.