All Comments on 'A Soldier For All Seasons Ch. 07'

A compelling read! Looking for more!!!

They asking for trouble .

Great story

An addictive space opera. The universe could do with A wider variation of aliens.

Great story looking forward to lots more.

Love the story ... wait for each part. But come-on 2 pages at a time ! At least at this rate we will still be reading it in 2024 and most of your readers will have tired of being spoon fed and found something else ! Sneaky way to get those interested to go to your other $PAY$ site.

Stewartb, how about u trying to write 2 pages? That's at least 7 pages on Google docs

You've been churning out chapters at a heck of a pace, and yet, your story has amazing world building and intrigue. I am thoroughly enjoying this tale, and thanks for sharing it with us!

Definitely 3 square meals inspired. But nice shorter chapters. Everyone has to start somewhere.

On the satellite design - a hollow wheel or cylinder, spinning at the correct speed for the diameter, would provide a gravity-like effect for the inner surface of the outside edge - no gravity generators or shields required. If it broke up, the pieces would fly out and away from eachother, following their last tangential vector from the angular acceleration, as adjusted by whatever force broke it apart - but it wiuld take a purposefully shaped energy application to force any two parts of the station closer together while spinning. If the station stopped spinning, there's still not enough mass to create any meaningful gravitational force, and nothing would "fall", especially towards the empty middle - it would just be like being inside of a non-spinning dpace station, like the ISS. Free fall sex, baby!

I don't know if I'd call this inspired by or a straight rip off of Three Square Meals. 🤔 then locking the last 20 or so chapters behind a Patreon pay wall I think I'll give it up here. I was hoping for some originality that I don't think I'm gonna find having already read 3square meals.