All Comments on 'A Soldier is on 48-hour Leave'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Sorry, I got about 2-3 paragraphs in and couldn't read anymore. Just poorly written

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Just average! A 3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The names ruined it for me and she should have got pregnant ....

Holistic_VoyeurHolistic_Voyeur11 months ago

That was really hot. Very well written and so intense so quickly. Nice work!

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I am from the Middle East, and my mother tongue is not English. I apologize for my poor English, but I hope to give you some fun. I love you all.