All Comments on 'A Soldier's Surrender Pt. 02'

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Submisky35Submisky35over 5 years ago
Well written story

Reading this makes me want to go back and find Part 1 which I somehow missed. I'll look forward Part 3 if there will be one. The soldier's feelings through all of his experienced are described well. All the sandpaper seemed over the top.(Can you buy such large sheets?)

Bob_AganoushBob_Aganoushover 5 years ago
Another good chapter

Like part 1, well written and very erotic. My only quibble is wth both episodes of anal sex. No lube? Most would tell you that that is not likely nor advisable. Otherwise, well done and realistic.

kylie74kylie74over 5 years ago
loved it

great cont. of from the first part well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The biggest piece trash [ have ever read.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

More please.

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