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All Comments on 'A Son Returned Ch. 01'

by KarolinKolberg

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YaBoiBigChungus7YaBoiBigChungus719 days ago

Definitely a great set up cant wait for more

muskyboymuskyboy18 days ago

I gave you a 4, as it is your first story, but it is far short of a story, more like an opening scene to a story. I would strongly suggest waiting until you have written the entire story before submitting. In the future, FTDS!

dirtysondirtyson16 days ago

Its a good start, but this didn't really lead to anything...

docholliday0007docholliday000713 days ago

Nice story can’t wait for the next chapter keep up the fine work

OI8U2OI8U213 days ago

Great first story. Can't wait for more. 4 Stars

AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

Just average so far no sex or incesy 3 stars

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