by Nymfoholic
Yes, interesting. But predictable and barely literate. Editor or spell check would stifle the reader's laughter.
That was the best short story I have ever read!!! I am lost for words......
but then lost its way, characters needed more development and the plot too. she may have been 18 and dumped with a baby but she was rich and had a grandmother, she came across more than just submissive but dumb. editng would mprove this, keep writing......
I think it was the best story i read, i love your stories and I've read them all. Can't wait for the next one. To those critics go read Archie comics don't listen to them because they will make your stories boring. Maybe just dont let the grandmother and Stacy die but then again if they did not i would not have cried lol. Great story loved it.
One of the most complete and full stories available on this site. Please write more of this quality.
Wow! Thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed reading it. Please keep posting, I love your writing style :)