by SmokinJ
The story was fine except for the part where he left her without any way of seeing or knowing she was still alright.
With all due respect, she trusts Jack and knows she will be alright...
He was gone a matter of 30 years minutes... and that was the point.
My fantasy cannot be everyone else's...
FIVE STARS FROM ME!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this interesting tale. Perhaps I'm not enough of a stickler for all the safety guidelines of BDSM, but I was not concerned about the 30 minutes she was left alone. Besides, after all, this was as work of fiction, not a tutorial. Keep up the good writing. I'll be looking for chapter 3.