All Comments on 'A Southern Man, Not So Gentle Ch. 02'

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ShadowRosieShadowRosieabout 4 years ago

The story was fine except for the part where he left her without any way of seeing or knowing she was still alright.

SmokinJSmokinJabout 4 years agoAuthor
That is the point...

With all due respect, she trusts Jack and knows she will be alright...

He was gone a matter of 30 years minutes... and that was the point.

My fantasy cannot be everyone else's...

Submisky35Submisky35about 4 years ago

FIVE STARS FROM ME!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this interesting tale. Perhaps I'm not enough of a stickler for all the safety guidelines of BDSM, but I was not concerned about the 30 minutes she was left alone. Besides, after all, this was as work of fiction, not a tutorial. Keep up the good writing. I'll be looking for chapter 3.

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