All Comments on 'A Spanish Summer Evening'

"tongue finds your g-spot"??? That's one hell of a long tongue!

A few items aside, I found the game to be quite tantalizing and look forward to reading more offerings.

we know where it comes from. from the fog in your brain mike.

I almost didn't get past the first sentence. Utterly pretentious writing. But I bashed on. It just got worse and worse. Then abandoned all attempts at grammar or spelling or plot or plain common sense.

And it is always a bad idea to have a second person character, 'you'.

"You did this. You did that" is just irritating. No, I didn't!

She found my clit? Fucking amazing. I'm male!