All Comments on 'A Special Christmas Vacation Ch. 02'

Great Story!

And i gotta wait for more *sigh*. I'm enjoying the story.

That was an awesome story

Very well written and believable!

There must be a good bit more to the story. Do you think a love affair is brewing? For reasons of my own, I hate broken marriages and I hope it doesn't come to that, and I also hope the husband knows his wife is gay and that they can get along as friends with girlfriends. (I actually know one MF couple who have the same girlfriend.) I also hope the mom stops working far too hard (been there, done that, but not on that scale) and learns to balance her work and her home life, which sounds like you are leading up to it. The reasons of my own are that I am a straight guy who values friendship with women, and would be heartbroken if I fell in love with someone and she then fell in love with someone else, doesn't matter who. Those seem to be the most irreconcilable differences of all. This is an unusual approach to the story and I like very much the way you tell it.

WOW!!! Great story, I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!! Please hurry in making the next part!!! I am sooo hooked on this series!! :-)

Hoping we see a new installment soon. Hot stuff. Good writing.

Great story loooovvveeed the story. Keep going on this story can't wait for the next chpt. In the next chpt.get jennifer and the girls showing each others sexy cloth & maybe bring in some of her sex toys she has in the drawers. What are jennifers body measurements?

and I need part 3 to live. please help?

Lovely Story dear Samantha,

Please, don't wait to long for Part 3 mmmmmm

Wet wet kisses

Aunt Helena

POrtugal

Samantha, you've written a couple of very enjoyable chapters here, five stars' worth each, so try not to be too long with the next part. Now, I hope you don't mind but I'd like to give you a couple of tips about presentation. Firstly, unless they are incredibly high, write numbers as words, not figures, especially when starting a sentence. Secondly, your very long strings of periods after words spoil the look of the text. Use of periods in this fashion is called an ellipsis and is intended to imply a word or words unwritten, should be used sparingly, and should never consist of more than three periods, e.g. "Jen thought she might be falling in love with Samantha..."

Please take these comments as intended to be helpful because your writing is quite good but presentation and layout can be as important as good grammar and spelling.

Brian

I must admit for being a man, this story is amazing! I understand most male audience's love lesbian and taboo porn, but to read something like this is absolutely refreshing to my soul!

I find it even better that you keep out the sex toys between the two chapters and seriously hope you keep them out of your story. It makes the story feel more like it's authenically meant for a lesbian audience!

It's a perverted dream for me to watch three or more women have lesbian sex with each other. Not watching a porn video or looking at a magazine, but to be there in the action watching them preform the beauty of taboo with out them acknowledging me while the do, hearing the raw beautiful sounds they make engaging their most profound amusment with each other!

I loved your story very much so. Its just amazing to imaging the experiences in their new relationships!

I need more of this story I hope the next part is about love because if it was lust then Sam wouldn't be feeling the way she does now,and if it was mindless sex then they would not be treating themselves as lovers.

I hope its love. I can tell that Samantha is falling in love with Jennifer.

Wow, you paint an image and convey an emotion that leaves me breathless.