by ewriter
I thought the sex scene went a little quickly, but all in all, a very nice story, almost sweet. Keep up the good writing.
I'm not sure if he knew she had been a virgin or not. It was a good story, more romantic than erotic I thought.
Lot of courage on the girls part, but she didn't know that she would be fitted by Billy. Both got what they wanted, then, and later. Good read.
I loved the story.. I had a high just reading and anticipating what the 2 would do.
Really liked the way you built it up. I love underwear and I'm a busty girl so I could relate. Lucky Laura, I wish my bra shop had Billy to measure me up. Thank you, I need to go and have some time alone after reading that.
It's good to find a impregnation story that didn't involve incest or cuckoldry.
Sometimes SEX and love at first sight work out. I hope this story is one of those times, because Billy and Laura deserve the joy. It is a tale sweetly told. I like it a WHOLE lot.
I agree with the others that the sex did go rather quickly. For me though, what would have made it better was if the phrase "white boob meat" wasn't in this story. It was kind of just awkward and not very sexy at all. I also would have liked to hear more of what happened after that day in the store, there could have been so much more that could have been done with that, but overall i thought it was pretty good.
One of the best stories I have ever read!!! (not only among the naughty ones ;-) )
Great story, Beautifully written bring to life the feelings and emotions of both the girl as well as the boy.
He brought this shy young girl that didn't think much of herself out of her shell making her into a sexual woman.
A great ending.
I can most definitely see women trying to lure / trip up a man in said circumstances; love that the hoity-toity biotch didn't get him 8~) ,,, DKP
It was really sweet, and focused on two great main characters that were perfect for each other.
This phrase is the worst; please reconsider ever using it again!
The tale was steamy, but boob meat was definitely not. All the same, thanks for the lovely warm up!