All Comments on 'A Species' Survival Ch. 08'

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I'm enjoying the story so far can't wait for more

a species survival indicates breeding. are any of these women going to get pregnant?

It was an interesting idea for a story, but it seems like you've forgotten the original premise.

Anthony was infected by the black alien goo, then given pheromones to help him seduce and impregnate women, so he could pass on the genetic code for the extinct species.

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So why aren't all these girls pregnant yet?

There's no point in Nina, Liz, or Marge going to college, when they're going to be too busy raising his children to have a career. All three should already be knocked up, with Anthony looking forward to adding dozens of hot co-eds to his growing harem.

Aside from switching partners the sex is too fast and repetitive. Boom this position, boom switch. Almost feels like sex scenes are copy and pasted then edited s little.

FYI,

"A Species' Survival" Chapter 12

"A Strange Compulsion" Chapter 12

"A Wolf's Rage" Chapter 12

is on her Patreon page at:

https://www.patreon.com/rebekahkarlsen

Waiting on the next chapters.

This is a dud

There is some incest, but it is incidental to the story. I would have put this in Mind Control.

The sex scenes are repetitive.

Seems like the author is trying to churn out stories as quickly as possible.

Now that he has fucked both his mother and his former friends mother, he needs to start tapping some other mature pussies. His teachers as an example.

I agree with some of the other comments, that these women should all be ending up pregnant.

Can’t wait for more

Honestly good story but when are all the women going to be pregnant and give birth to his children because at this point I feel like they storyline is starting to get boring

Yeah ok he lasts forever and never gets the girls pregnant boring

It becomes boring. The repeating of the same stuff. Not utilizing the dom aspect and much moore