All Comments on 'A Species' Survival Ch. 09'

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Stopped after 4 or 5 paragraphs. The final straw was the paragraph that just listed all of the mundane garbage that so many bad writers put in their submissions to bolster their word count when all it really does is make a boring story more boring and give the readers more credence for their thought that this person isn't a writer.

This reads like if someone who has never read a novel was suddenly asked to adapt a script.

It can be entirely summarized as: "A does x to B, while feeling y"

There is no trace of style or personality or sexiness.