All Comments on 'A Stab in the Dark'

Honestly I liked the one before this one. This one has quite a few errors, mixed up names and in some parts just plain confusing. I still liked it but just saying, the other two were better.

Awesome job, I loved this story. I've always been a fan of tentacles and the stuff you did with the hellhound, but reading back through your previous stories I found I enjoyed the rest of it too! I'm quite looking forward to the next adventure of Ashley and Kathryn.