All Comments on 'A Stairwell to Heaven'

A lot of questions come to my mind about this story. Why does Mr. Bohn have so much power over him, and why does his daughter act so much like a slut? Those are just the two main questions.

Maybe in the next chapter all will be answered, at least I hope so.

Thanks for the read.

I've been enjoying reading your submissions, you really capture the "playful slut" vibe perfectly, here and elsewhere. Keep it up!

I really like this - you have a deliciously filthy mind :)

Hope to read more of you

Very enjoyable, but I would have preferred a full story rather than just dialogue. Hopefully you will return to this one day and flesh this out.