by zzim
Story was very erotic until Paul pulled out his cock from her pussy and shot his spunk on her, not knowing whether or not she was on birth control? Hmmmm.....
...he pulled out. Seems like you had a brain fart there, since she was in control as you stipulated, she either 1) was taking the pill or 2) WANTED him to impregnate her. Besides, it's only a story, so you should have let him spurt that massive load into her pussy and have her orgasm from his shooting.
Does anyone on lit write anything even half realistic,,, fuck come on ,, every guy in the world is not ron jeremy
Do you enjoy reading about small limp dicked people better? Does mr tiny barely doi g anything to please woman turn you on more? Theres a reason you'd rather watch Evan Stone plow a woman instead of your boss.
Author ignore this guy, keep up the practice of writing. The more to you do, the more you learn.