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by Deskfire

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good story line.

HOWEVER, you need to start proof reading and/or learn some English.

When you wrote "bear arms," I imagined arms covered in thick fur.

Also, plastic {fake} tits may sound nice, but they feel like shit, and have very little feeling for the first few years.

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