All Comments on 'A Story about a Girl'

BL, I found this a fascinating variation on the AI genre, A quick, stripped down street-racer of a story. Should David had used a condom to prevent the accidental creation of Jane?

Thanks :)

And I doubt a condom would have made any difference in this case.

Hey Blue!

You are a great writer! Much of it over my head, but I live it immensely. I doubt you even check these anymore and will never see this, but just in case I want you to know you are appreciated as a talent.

By the way, why so secretive? Not even mentioning your gender. It doesn't matter, either way you are fun to read.

My best to you!

Poorwriter

very nice!

minor gripe: i feel like there could have been more context for david and jane's first conversation (the one where she whines), since 4 italic sentences could have been anything.

really nice and cute story, though.