by MONALISALEE
another nonenglish writer that fails to post a readable english story. go back to a good english school and learn then always use a GOOD ENGLISH EDITOR BEFORE POSTING.
... that there are so many intolerant readers on this site. I would be willing to bet that most of them are barely literate, let alone speak more than one language. Your English might not be perfect, but you have the courage to put yourself out there, and the story is not bad. Keep it up.
A very difficult story to follow due to the annoying nature of the bad use of the English language....so frustrating...