All Comments on 'A Strange Family Ch. 01'

Please write the next part soon

That was unbelievably good. I am SO looking forward to seeing the next part.

Very entertaining story. Thanks for sharing.

Great story, but paragraph length could use some variation and grammar could use some editing Also, you don't need to constantly remind us the men love big breasts. It's established at the beginning. 4/5.

But did I miss something, all this talk about

HUGE TITS, how big are they?? give us a size.

then we all can laugh, and be happy.

BIG TITS done always make a story.

I too have enjoyed this writer's stories very much. One can understand the great difficulty of writing/composing a piece in,say,German or French and then translating into perfect English. Not that you could even do that really because you would have to choose from UK, AUS,US,CAN, SA etc etc some of which differ greatly from others.

So, you can see a few places where the grammar change has not kept up with language change. Surprisingly few in the circumstances.

The "editor" seems to be much out of depth in all this

Keep on writing, please!!

By the way. The bra size was mentioned. It's 34E.

m222rjr

Loved the mom son story, very hot, got a big hardon reading it. More stories like this.

Also loved your futanari stories.

Ken

5 stars. Grammar was fine. What a mom made for fucking

Fabulous story, well done. Really wanked at the mother and son scenario! Give us more!

Cool that Dad is not clueless in this family.