All Comments on 'A Strange Thing Happened on the Way'

I love the promise of this story. Really enjoy slow burns too, so this works for me. Would love to see more.

I Like the way it's going carry on

Great premise and the chapter is well written. I look forward to seeing what you can do with it.

It doesn't really do anything for me, but is pretty well written. I'm not going to leave a rating as it's hard to leave an appropriate rating for a story you're neutral to, but encourage you to write what you want to write. Ratings and comments are a good gauge of whether or not you should post them here but, unless you're just using this site as an advertising/beta reader platform before selling an edited version, you need to write what moves you.

good start, certainly would like to see more of the psychological and emotional challenges ahead for her. of course sexual identity, sexuality are going to be issues. so will getting her period and possible pregnancy/ all the emotions are taught to bottle up and ignore she will have to deal with.

Thanks, BrokenMan! Enjoyable read. For my part I hope you continue.

Absolutely continue. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

The premise is fascinating so yes, please do continue with Keiko's story.

Working on it

It needs to be much longer.

I would like to read more.