All Comments on 'A Stranger at a Bar'

Great story! It reads more like a rape than casual sex, although by the end it seems to be consensual. It's either a fairly horrific or a wonderful way to overcome a difficult workday. Which one? Both? I wonder what happens next? Do you enjoy being a tease? 5*

I like the premise, but the execution is lacking. The sentences are choppy where they should flow, matter-of-fact detail where there should be(for lack of a better phrase) “word painting”.

Feel free to contact me if you need an editor

I love the story from beginning to the ending...taking her without her full consent and her loving it and giving herself more to him...it feels so real and its one of my crazy fantasy

Hi Michael

Hot. Damn.

5 stars, I've got to admit that your woman's perspective of being willingly raped is quite refreshing. You jam a lot of story into a few number of words. Good job!!!