All Comments on 'A Stranger's Cabin Ch. 01'

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DonQuixoteindfwDonQuixoteindfwabout 13 years ago

Good Read! would love to read more

imurddyimurddyabout 13 years ago
dittos

I would too!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Good Beginning

You're off to an excellent start with this tale. It would be nice to read more of this deliciously nasty story...Keep up the good work, mate.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
keep going great story

keep going great story!

one more chapter would have been perfect

Pugac2020Pugac2020about 13 years ago
Great read!

Was really getting into it, cant wait for more :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

too slow but not bad

BarbaraBarbaraabout 13 years ago
Accidental incest is great, when justified by survival!

Similarly a son can hardly be blamed for being intimate with his Mother in similar circumstances! Incest hardly counts as criminal, especially in the case of anal exploration leading to orgasmic climax, keeping bodies warm!

venus_canvenus_canabout 13 years ago
Nice Start to the Story

I love the nice descriptions and the slow way the sex develops. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
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Fuckin' A, that was hot! Now this is how a story is supposed to be written.

More, more, more!

oldwayneoldwayneabout 13 years ago
Definitely 5 Stars so far!

HOT!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
sensuous n seducing

can't wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Simmering lust

Great start to what I hope will be more episodes of a very good sensuous story - well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Loved It!

Such a good daughter to suck Daddy's cock and swallow all his cum! Can't wait until they fuck a storm. Great incest story.

Ms_StarliteMs_Starliteabout 13 years ago

I really, really enjoyed your story. Yummmm

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
More!

More! More!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
more

more please!

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSabout 13 years ago
This is great stuff

I love the way you stranded them together alone cutoff from the world, it seems likely enough to happen. It has a nice easy slow progression and nothing feels forced, plus you leave us yearning for more GREAT JOB! I hope there are several more parts of the story to come thank you. But pls don't get the poor girl knocked up with her fathers child. Maybe he had a vasectomy. Can't wait foe more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Please...

Edge of my seat here, I NEED more? Please? :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Still waiting...

I'm getting a little impatient here.

twistedjoe37twistedjoe37about 13 years agoAuthor
I haven't forgotten!

Thanks for your patience, all. I got a little distracted by a new lady in my life, but I'm back to writing now, and part 2 of this story should post in a few days. I hope it will be worth the wait!

TJ

Bun79Bun79about 13 years ago
I'm patient

Loving this story, I'm soaked after reading and I'm very patiently waiting for the continuation. Kudos

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Read it all.

This is just awesome. I could not help imagining that I was the daughter taking all of daddies goodies.

pusylvr69pusylvr69over 12 years ago
HOT! HOT! HOT!

I love the start of this story. Just enough description to keep it going in a constant up hill climb to ecstasy. Going on to chapter 02 shortly. Thanks for the enjoyable reading!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
sooo good

LOVED this! Thought it was really well written. Cant wait to read more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very Sexy Well Written Story

I justed finished chapter one and I can't wait to start chapter two. You sir have an amazing talent for writing and I hope you continue because you will only get better. I found myself genuinely interested in characters and their situation almost immediately. The slow pace leading up to the very sensual and extremely erotic bedroom scene really turned me on. It was getting tough to resist the urge to touch myself while reading on my lunch break at work. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading your current selection of stories. Thank you! :) Next time I will log when I make a comment so you know who your fans are!

Nicole

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Awesome story and great writing. Thank you.

SUPERRRR - 100000000 thx !!!!!! To me it's a fun-taste-ic incest story. Your are an awesome writer. Please go on like that ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
the best story and favorite Author!!!

All your story is so hot!!!! I like them so much.Please to continue your wonderful writing put in your story scene about sharing beautyful young daughters with friends,co-workers ect...

peebudypeebudyover 11 years ago
very good

what a great story. well written, good pace and dialogue, believable. can't wait for chapter two!

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123about 11 years ago
A Stranger's Cabin Ch. 01

There are two chapters to this series of "A Stranger's Cabin Ch. 01", both posted just over two years ago. This first chapter is the finding and awakening of a daughter's man/woman love of her father, and the father reluctantly allowing the seduction of her daughterly love. They are stranded in a summer vacation home covered with more than two feet of snow.

Of all the many variations of incestual sexual, between blood-related family members, father and daughter is my most favorite and most enjoyable. However, I have a grave attraction to mother and son incest because of the greater probablility of pregnancy occurring of the female/mother and male/son. I'm not exactly sure why that is, but that is my perception. My ideal incest consummation includes a pregnancy and/or the probability of a pregnancy taking place. Pregnancy adds a finality of love, of the communion and coupling of the affair as no other act or emotion can; it is the ultimate, final vow of love that cannot be surpassed!!

This couple, daughter and father, is an excellently written, detailed and decribed sufficiently to provide an almost phyusical visual of their dilemma of being snow-bound, the nakedness in bed and their first consummation of their incestual coupling.

The character's are well described, the dialogue is excellent and the story theme is a well thought out situation. There is a Chapter 02; I'll read that before I venture a request for any additional writings of this fabulous couple, very charming daughter and father ultimate family time!!!

OleguyOleguyalmost 11 years ago
That was great.

Can't wait to read the continuation.

lrogerblrogerbover 10 years ago
Love the story

Well written and I love the way father and daughter find themselves in a situation of survival. I'm ready for Ch.2

camstevens33camstevens33over 8 years ago
Amazing!

I've read this story several times, and part 2. Twistedjoe is one of the best authors on Literotica, and so far as I can tell yet, no one does father-daughter short stories as well as him. I'd love to read something novella length!

Ib_SaysIb_Saysover 7 years ago

I liked it but a shame she wasn't a virgin though that would gave made it a bit more special if she was saving herself for him :-)

bgdick68bgdick68over 5 years ago
Very believeable

I loved this first part. Seems so natural for the two to get intimate. I am hard reading this. More please

rosemaveyrosemaveyalmost 3 years ago

ohmygod you're now one of fave daddy/daughter-cest authors i like how u write!!!!

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123almost 3 years ago

"A Stranger's Cabin Ch. 01:" - It's been about eight (8) years since I first read this, shall I say, beautiful tale of a very sensuous father and daughter's budding romance and converging "man/woman" love affair. It makes my very alert pussy-tickler a thunder-throbbing instrument of cum/semen love potion, when a story of deep love and feelings between incestuous male and female members of blood relations, finally comes together...as intended by mother nature!! The story is even better this time than I remember the first time reading it. I'm the father of a very beautiful, sensuous daughter. I know the joys of their most favorite, female attributes, their usage when they want, and what they want their father to love and appreciate. This writer captures and expresses in words those same feeling and yearnings that I know so well. That is an incest couple's life at its very best and everlastingly the father's best ever accomplishment!!!

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