All Comments on 'A Strike of Lightning Pt. 01'

Yes, please continue this story! I think eventually sleep with a the family women.

I would love to see this story continue.

...the repeated use of the family last name was very offputting. To hear mom referred to as "the Parchek mother" was just freaking weird. Please refrain from that in future chapters.

Pretty good, so far. Obviously, he’ll get to all of them. A bit more control of his “powers” seems reasonable. And, of course, there’s the female park ranger who stops by.

Please continue

Excellent - and yes, more of this story is definitely needed. as many chapters as you like.

But please get a proof reader: there are several places with words missing, sometimes making the sentence meaningless.

Where is this leading? He's already had a blowjob from one sister, fucked another, and now his mother. Is this electricostatic discharge theme going somewhere, or is it just a dumb plotline? It's almost as bad as a porn storyline.

I vote continue

Yes more this story is great

Your use of the word “literally” is literally overuse.

Great story so far and I definitely what to read part two!!!