All Comments on 'A Study in Fragrance Pt. 07'

I heve been enjoying the story but was confused by the small section near the end starting with 'Coincidence'. Does the story just jump a year ahead? I don't remember any previous jumps in the time line. Going well considering seven story parts and she is still a virgin. 😉

Thank you for your comment!

Yes. The story, in its original formatting makes it clear when events shift in time. Because of Lit's limitations regarding formatting, I've tried to illustrate those time shifts using italics and curlicues. (The original formatting is significantly more colorful and fontful!).

Thank you for your considerate reaction! Be prepared for a bit more of the time jumping, and eventually, I'll get the Lit gods to update the story with better formatting.

21/02/17, Quick update: I’ve updated all of the formatting to improve readability and clarity on time shifts. All parts should have new and improved font treatments by the end of the month.

Hopefully the clockface separators help readers navigate the time shifts. Thanks again for pointing that out.

Stunning, breathtakingly sensual. Oh and yes the row of *clocks* makes it very obvious that there’s a time split.

Tess (uk)